Showing posts with label 2022 Prompt #17. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2022 Prompt #17. Show all posts

Monday, 20 June 2022

'Freedom from Time' by Molly Lanzarotta

In every age, a mature woman of experience is eyed with suspicion, called names (but “Wise” is not often one of them). 

She recounts: “There’s a pull, a push.”

We listen, in a hush.

 

“Our cycles,” she says, “the moon.” Then whispers, “New rules soon.”

 

“Light, its speed, will not budge,” might say the professor, a decisive judge.

 

The reporter: “Truth is not a perspective.”

 

The officer: “Time is a detective.”

 

“Laws are unchanging, inscrutable,” says the minister, mutable.

 

The philosopher: there’s no “yes,” no “no.”

 

The up-and-coming starter-upper says: “Let’s go!”

 

But that wise woman of every century: when she spotted accepted truth, that old dragon, she slayed it, soon as she could see it.

 

I asked her, “Can you tell time?” so she told it off, and so it stayed, like truth and the dragon, slayed. Time—no longer fate—reduced to this lesser state.

 

Time turned off, so: there is no mystery, no history. What then of you and me? You sing, “I love you to eternity.”

 

But time, ended, its arrow, bended to an arc that peters…stutters…derails. Where is the fact that never fails?

 

In truth, then, love must subdue all, of a moment, and our story’s rise and fall.

Sunday, 19 June 2022

'Don’t Feed the Animals' by Kate Simblet

She was not one for rules, so got sent to a ‘Home’. Discipline, the answer to all wayward girls. Her spirit came with her, climbed over the walls, sneaked past the guards and the bolts on the door. On cold lonely nights amidst the bleak of the dorm, it was fire in her belly that helped keep her warm.  

Their answer was ‘No’. Her question ‘Why not?’  

She searched through dark corridors for justifications, found reasons more rotten than food from their kitchen. A sick institution, no sign of a cure, long years stretched ahead like the coils of barbed wire, so she revised tactics, switched from defiance. Donned a new uniform: the disguise of compliance.

Good behaviour was eventually rewarded with trust, so she swallowed her pride, proved she could be good. Weeded the garden, nurtured new plants, polished the floors, baked cakes for the staff. Calmer and docile, she rose through the ranks, slept more than argued, a smile on her face. When release day arrived, she knew what she’d do: rewarded her freedom with a trip to the Zoo.

Her pick-pocket fingers nimble though bars, relishing warmth as giraffes nibbled palms, she cavorted with elephants, tossed buns to their trunks, laughed with hyenas, monkeyed with apes. She fed all the animals until nothing was left, got all of them stoned on her cannabis cakes – apart that is from the pandas. She decided they were mellow enough.   

The institution had certainly taught her a lesson: the answer lies inside. When there’s just no escape and the doors are kept locked, the secret’s in freeing your mind.

'Willpower' by Claire Schön

It’s not yet a new year. No reason for a reset, a realisation. 

It’s a Tuesday at the end of April. Summer sweats in the chill spring shade, restless. Billboard threats blaze with bikinis on cool mannequins, lifeless.

I survived Easter, I survived Julie’s fortieth and that cake, I even survived staying at Mum’s for a week and butter served with a scrape of toast. 

So, why now?

I’m blaming the dream. I was at my own funeral, a whisp of a thing, well, a ghost. I was floating around listening to nothing. Nothing. Nobody had anything to say. Well, they did, sentiments like, ‘There was nothing left of her in the end'. They were nipping at Ryvitas, sipping water. 

I zoomed in on myself – in the box. Lycra-clad, plus trainers. Trainers. So much training, resistance, resisting temptation, wrestling the truth. I looked good but dead.

Dead: the streets always are when I wake, make myself take those first steps, do the reps, eat the eggs, just the whites that aren’t white but nothingy, transparent. 

Not today. Today I lie in my bed. I lie and tell the truth instead. My truth. My smashed-up bright yellowy-orange-yolked truth. 

I’m round: rounded; I could do with losing a few pounds. Losing. Who wants to be a loser? Lose out? Miss out? Deny. I defy the lie we should live. Live. Give. Give in. Give life a chance. I will. I’m taking back the power.

Saturday, 18 June 2022

NFFD 2022 Prompt #17: Freedom


Freedom

This is National Flash Fiction Day's eleventh anniversary, so this year, all our prompts have something to do with the number 11....

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The theme for this year's National Flash Fiction Day Anthology is 'freedom'.  As editors Karen Jones and Christopher Drew put it:

Flash fiction offers the writer a freedom not often seen in traditional, longer form fiction.  Freedom with language, with structure, with character and point of view.  Freedom to experiment and to arrange thoughts on the page in new and surprising ways.

For this next prompt, we invite you embrace this freedom and sense of exploration....  Write a flash about a very unusual freedom.

And, of course, if you don't yet have a copy of this year's anthology, you can find it at the National Flash Fiction Day Bookshop.

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If you’re submitting this to us, make sure to note that this is a response to Prompt 17: Freedom.

You can submit responses until 23:59 BST on Sunday, 19 June 2022 for a chance to be published here at The Write-In.