Showing posts with label 2023 Prompt #19. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2023 Prompt #19. Show all posts

Monday, 26 June 2023

'Local Attractions' by Leigh Loveday

 

He misses the turnoff to the village, curses and drives on. He’s already late, caught out by the tail end of Friday rush hour.

Minutes later, smeared through the rain, a second sign appears.

Little Belliston (via the Heart of a Black Star)

He blinks, but takes the turn.

On the deserted single-track lane, he casts around for an explanation of the sign’s intent. There is nothing.

And then, without warning, there is nothing. Primal darkness tumbles in from all directions, cascading dreadfully down the hillsides, gushing up through potholed tarmac.

What– what is–

The rain abates, or is overwhelmed. Pressure builds rapidly inside the car; his ears pop, his eye sockets throb like badly wired toothache. Panic rising, he steers through a void.

Time flattens out like roadkill. Direction signs buckle under his skittering headlights. He is inverted, then backwards, then spinning end over end. Masonry and fenceposts ricochet off the roof. His nose bleeds. The droplets hang in the air.

He is going mad. He should brake, put his hazard lights on, try to control what’s happening. But now there is no air. There is a terrible, charring heat that swallows everything. His bones groan under unbearable strain. He makes sounds of deep distress, or tries to.

A rich black scent invades the car and he thinks, eternity.

Then:

Rain is sheeting down the glass. The road grumbles beneath him. Watery daylight returns. Breath rushes into his lungs.

According to the car’s clock, it’s Sunday morning. He has 11 missed calls.

He drives into Little Belliston.

The village hall looks quaint.

'Bless You' by Donna M Day

I don’t remember the first time I sneezed, but my last sneezing fit was very memorable.

I was about to kiss Callum, the most beautiful boy in high school, for the very first time when I felt the telltale tickle and ducked away.

Achoo!

I screamed. The baby was crowning, and Callum was holding my hand telling me I was doing so well, and I just needed to breathe but I needed to…

Achoo!

Sat in the mud tears were streaming down my face as my mother wiped my grazed knee. God, I miss her.

Achoo!

My daughter is beautiful walking down the aisle on Callum’s arm. I notice my own ring finger is naked. Damn.

Achoo!

Being old makes me want to sneeze. Oh, the aching.

Achoo!

Callum is smiling, bemused, as I peer at him over a heap of tissues.

I’ll never forget our first kiss. I’ve done it 5,236 times.

Sunday, 25 June 2023

'Sticks and Stones' by Lynda McMahon

Pee on the stick, wait five minutes, bake for nine months, mature for eighteen years… 

Try again next month.  And… Running out of time. Pee on the stick. Get to twelve weeks. Celebrate! Thirteen weeks, all lost. From heartbeat to death in seven short days. Or long days. I measured out my life in months and weeks. Pee on the stick…

Stick the pee. Pee sticks? Pooh sticks! Which stick? Walking stick.

“Don’t pee on your stick, sweetheart!” 

Who are these people? I’m not old am I? I can’t be; surely time hasn’t gone so fast, has it? They’re telling me what to do as if I’m a child. They call me ‘love’ and ‘dear’, ‘darling’ and “sweetheart’. They can’t remember my name.. I can’t remember my name. I had one once, a long time ago. It might have been Claire or maybe Nancy. There was a time, I’m pretty sure, when I remembered everything.

Why don’t my children come and take me away from here? I’ve been here years. Or maybe weeks. I had lots of children. Didn’t I? I remember children. Babies. My babies.

Is it teatime yet? Breakfast? No, I’ve had breakfast. After I peed on the stick.  

“Next time!” you said. Next month, next year… No children and no you.  Just me, now, at the end of my days. Daze time. Mazed time. Out of time.

They’re coming for me, all smiles and encouragement. They’ll want me to do something. Something I don’t want to do. Bake a cake. Or dance. I hate dancing. Always have. I think.

“What day is it?” I ask that a lot. Apparently.

“It’s the day the babies come to visit us!” I’d forgotten. 

“Are my babies coming? Where are my babies? Please tell me when my babies are coming!”

'All Of It Within You' by Sumitra Singam

In the beginning was Time. It was chubby, with little sausage wrists. It peed and pooed and cooed and gurgled and delighted everyone. But after a few months, it changed. It would snap tight around me like an elastic band whenever I settled on the couch with the remote. Or it would float wide, like a spreading oil slick on the ocean’s surface, beautiful with its swirling colours, wild and proud, refusing to be contained in any way. It seemed to choose threshold moments to do this, when all that was needed was teeth to be brushed, shoes to be put on. And in those moments when there was just an expanse of green meadowland in which to play, frolic, explore, be curious; Time would finish any activity within a finger snap. It would turn its face, pointier now, nostrils crusted with drying snot, demanding more by way of entertainment. Then in the time it took to blink, it found itself a little Attitude in its dorsolateral prefrontal cortex, and it started to sass everyone. Time found its own occupations, shuffling and mysterious, curfew-avoidant. Then Time left me, and the days swirled in a grey, meaningless haze. Now Time returns with its own chubby bundle, seeking to share its burden with me, and the remote lies neglected once again. Time complains to me of how her own little bundle escapes the laws of physics. And I say to her, you, Time, you are the laws of physics. You are my gravity, my buoyancy, my light and dark, my everything and nothing. You are my Time; you hold all of it within you.

'Warped Time' by Sravanthi Challapalli

She had lost many days during the pandemic when weekdays merged in a listless procession, she missed deadlines, it was mostly a Wednesday that she ended up missing but today she thought it was October 1 but it was still September 30. Restive, shiftless, undisciplined, clueless, what would she do with an extra day, it still felt like she’d lost it though she had actually gained one.

'Kozyrev’s Madness' by David Hampton

 

Let’s do the time warp again:-

I stare at myself. The mirror is concave. My image stares back – distorted and blurry. I sit inside a spiral made from aluminium sheets 8 feet tall – not a very good mirror. The time I entered is different to the time inside.

 ‘Time doesn’t exist,’ the voice whispers.

‘What does exist?’

‘Only now. Be careful you may bend inside yourself and break - rules are there for a reason after all. They stop you from going mad.’

‘I see the future. I look sad.’

‘You are your future as well as your past.’

‘What am I?’

‘You are a time traveller floating on a river. This thing you sit it in lets you paddle faster – faster than you should. Do not be so quick to see your end and after all, you cannot change what is - no matter how much you wish it.’

 ‘I can see fire.’

‘Yes.’

‘A great fire.’

 Yes.’

‘I don’t like it.’

‘No.’

‘This spiral is it magic?’

‘Is a bird magic, is the moon magic?’

‘Yes.’

‘Then yes, it’s magic.’

‘I think I prefer to float than paddle.’

‘Very wise. Do not spend too much time here. For when time disappears you do too.’

‘What time is it?’

‘Interesting question, though we do not have the time, for now, it is time to go. Other creatures lurk in this realm not nearly as nice as me.

Another time then. Wait I think I see one. His eyes they’re….big.’

‘Go before he sees you.’

I stand up. My heart’s thumping against my chest. I stumble out of the spiral. I give Time a warm hug and feel safe.

Let’s not do the time warp again for a very long time.


'Third Eye, A Concert Played Backward' in Time by Erin Vachon

When David flies, he will navigate with his right eyeball. The left, he will leave onstage with the encore, long after launched projectile. David will command his band: let's give them an extra-long set now. Time will collapse for seventy-five hundred fans, screaming his name in incantation, ballooning B-O-W-I-E, riding the pop star in sonic vibrations. Years will stick to David at odd angles, perpendicular. They called him an alien. He named himself one. They tested his character by throwing new things at him. See him win this round. Once he knew a girl, when he was young. His best friend loved her, like David did, they sparred, and David lost, a fist caught his left eyeball, lifelong heterocromia iridum, depth perception gone, dirty fingernail, iris paralyzed, his friend still producing his albums, and the girl, who knows, time collapsed on that side, his stubborn eye stuck hyper-expanding, until David stopped seeing her at all. He learned to overcompensate for sucker punches young. Commencing countdown, engines on. Tonight, time moves backward toward the inciting incident:

10. He will ask the crowd if violence is what they came for,

9. then play harder for the encore. 

8. He will ignore the pain in his eyeball,

7. shooing away the stage manager, fussing over him. 

6. His manager will pluck the stick out of his eyeball. 

5. Already paralyzed, the muscles of the left eye will save further damage, lightning twice 

striking the same location. 

4. The stick will lodge perpendicular, 

3. the projectile dangling candy off his socket.

2. A hand with fling the lollipop from the audience.

1. David will not expect the hit before the blow comes.

Lift-off: A starman wins another fight, singing to a glitter sky, on and on.

Another Round by Lisa Thornton

 

Where would you go? My drunk friends discuss over pints. If you could travel anywhere in time, past or future?

 

Medieval, sips Barrett, his face smug. Clearly imagining himself the knight upon black steed.

 

2502, announces Marie, describing hovering shopping malls and glamping trips to Mars, not saying Jack would be with her but we all know. Jack blushes.

 

Not to stop the energy I assume, Jack blurts Right now a little too loudly and then blushes again and says he likes his life the way it is. Marie smiles into her IPA.

 

But no one asks me. They know where I’d go and no one wants to talk about it. It’s hovering on my turn so Barrett prances to the jukebox and plays Every Rose Has Its Thorn. My favorite. An offering I don’t miss.

 

But I know we all see him. At the head of the table. A Guinness in one hand and a cig in the other. Cracking us up so we are doubled over. Begging for mercy. Our stomach muscles cramped and aching.

 

He winks at me and it’s last year. The snow gathering in the corners of the windows. Paradise City on the jukebox. Two hours before the train from Springfield to St Louis hits a little red car going home from the bar. One survivor, the driver not so lucky.

 

I tell him we should walk home. I tell him he’s had too much. He laughs and punches me in the side. He never listens.

 

Dance with me, Jack offers me his hand and I’m back. I slip my hand in his and we waltz across the sticky floor, twirling in the now. Dancing further and further away from the past.

 

 

Saturday, 24 June 2023

NFFD 2023 Prompt #19: Time Warp!

 


Time Warp!

Welcome to The Write-In!  This year, we're celebrating the 2023 National Flash Fiction Day Anthology theme of time.  Throughout National Flash Fiction Day, we'll be posting one time-related prompt on the hour every hour from now until midnight (BST), for a total of 25 prompts in all.  You have until midnight on Sunday (BST) to submit your responses for possible publication here at the Write-In.  We'll start posting responses on Sunday, 25 June 2023....

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Write a flash in which time doesn't pass in the expected way.  This can be due to a character's perception, supernatural forces, a scientific rational (realistic or otherwise), for a reason unexplained, or for whatever reason you might imagine.  Feel free to explore science fiction, fantasy, dreams, surrealism, magical realism if you like, or stick to the every-day world...whatever you prefer.

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If you’re submitting this to us, make sure to note that this is a response to Prompt 19: Time Warp!

You can submit responses until 23:59 BST on Sunday, 25 June 2023 for a chance to be published here at The Write-In.

You can claim the badge for this prompt until 23:59 BST on Sunday, 2 July 2023 by going to the here (hosted by the NFFD website).