Showing posts with label 2021 Prompt #15. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2021 Prompt #15. Show all posts

Monday, 28 June 2021

'The Trainyard' by Amy Wilson

Amelia still isn’t sure what it was she saw that day exactly but she knows she can’t tell anyone about it. She should never have been down at the trainyard in the first place, and if her father found out he would tan her hide. 

He’s always preaching about the dangers; the risk of getting hit by a moving train, or the risks of getting kidnapped by a vagrant (as if people were lining up to kidnap twelve-year-olds in broad daylight).

Her father never warned her about this though. How could he have?

Amelia was looking at her favourite old train carriage, the badly rusted one with all the graffiti. She was looking so hard in fact that she almost didn’t notice the figure behind her, until she heard a wheezing, grunting sound. She spun, excuses for her presence flying from her mind, and then realised it wasn’t a yard worker, a cop or – worse – her father. It was a man, stooped and shuffling awkwardly towards her, his torn jeans, rippling in the cold wind.

“Are you alright?” she asked.

He opened his mouth and made that strange sound again and this time, there was something else too, the smell of something spoiled and rotting. It hit Amelia so hard it made her nose sting and her eyes water.

She took a step back. The figure carried on moving, neither faster nor slower than before, and now she could see the pallor of his skin, the way it seemed to hang loosely from his bones as if it didn’t belong there anymore. Worse still, she could see how the man couldn’t quite close his mouth over rows and rows of pointed teeth.

Amelia can’t remember running home. She can’t talk about it. She thinks he’ll come back if she does.

'Rip Tide' by G K Wood

Salt left its tang on her lips and the sea roared while the wind gusted, whisking sand at her legs, her face, keen stings from wet grains scouring naked. This way she would be lacerated. She wished she'd worn trousers and not a pair of shorts and sandals; she wished she'd seen the squall coming and hadn't ignored the signs. The sudden shifts from gentle blue to howling demon, the vicious rip tides. Such treachery sickened her.

Rain beat at the silly plastic rain bonnet she'd found rammed into the pocket of her jacket, along with dog poop bags and assorted pieces of old string, wood, shells and pebbles. One of them caught her eye. Smooth and black, the rain made its surface glitter with hidden lights. They shone like tiny stars in a miniature galaxy.

It rested in her palm, and she remembered that day. Long ago. A hot, lazy, beach day, when her world ran riot and threw buckets of seawater at her and each other. Hyperactive, kids, dogs and husband, all crashing into the sea and back out to eat sandwiches filled with tuna, cucumber, luncheon meat and sand. They'd kicked it all over the towels and into the thermos and beakers, making everything crunchy and bit into fruit smeared by dirty fingers. It hadn't mattered one bit. Bill had dropped it in her hand, wrapped his fingers round hers as she grasped it, still warm.

“A token,” he said, laughing. She'd laughed too.

She stared at it until ghosts raced towards her, their voices a melody she wished she could forget, and she let it fall. The sound of it landing lay hidden in the drumbeat of waves and the slap of the lead on her thigh when she whistled for the dog.


'For His Own Good' by Emma Robertson

“The key was there. It was.” 

Beads of sweat prick his brow; hands trembling, he paces.

“This keeps happening.” I’m gentle, soothing. “It’s time to seek help.”

Sobbing, he nods, flopping resignedly into his chair. “You’re right. I’m sorry.”

Smiling, I carefully touch the key in my pocket. “It’s ok.”


'Taste the High Life' by Jennifer Lai

The weight of a thousand bricks presses against my chest as my lungs clamor for oxygen in the cool, thin air. Days-old deodorant reeks from my pits and forms hardened dark spots on my moisture-wicking shirt. A tattered white helmet smothers my oily obsidian hair loosely jumbled in a low bun by a stretched-out pink scrunchie. My feet, blistered and pruney, plod through calf-high patches of snowy earth in an enervated motion—stomp, stomp, break, stomp, stomp, break—the tempo of which reminds me of stoned karaoke singalongs in abandoned parking lots getting so baked the asphalt sparkled with diamonds. Snow-capped fortresses rise like apparitions towards the angel cake clouds. I am a peppercorn in a pile of salt, a period on a blank sheet of paper. At the summit, sunlight drops toward the horizon. Its backscatter crayons the mountains with swaths of terracotta and mango. The view rouses me like a quad shot latte, and I savor it with a long silence, interrupted only by the whispering wind telling me I am, once again, so very high. 

Saturday, 26 June 2021

NFFD 2021: Prompt #15

 


From the Archives

For the next prompt of our Tenth Anniversary NFFD Write-In, we bring you the set of prompts that were set for the 2014 Write-In, run by NFFD Founder Calum Kerr and team. In those days, instead of posting a prompt an hour, all prompts were posted at once, and writers had only hours to craft and submit a response.  This year, you have over 24!  Enjoy a blast from the past and have a go at one of the prompts below.... 

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If you’re submitting this to us, make sure to note that this is a response to Prompt 15: From the Archives.  (If it's not obvious, let us know in your email which image, theme or picture sparked your story!)

You can submit responses until 23:59 BST on Sunday, 27 June 2021 for a chance to be published here at The Write-In.

  

Archive of 2014 Write-In Prompts


Write a flash-fiction that begins with the sentence: "Amelia still isn't sure what it was she saw that day exactly, but ..."

or

Write a flash-fiction on the theme of one of the following:
  • back window
  • lost (and found?)
  • folded
  • TV highlights
  • torn curtain
  • nobody agrees
or

Write a story using one of the following photo prompts: